Tuesday, July 7, 2009

The correlation between writing and renovating

As some of you may already know, I’m 18 months into a fairly major renovation of my home. It’s a massive job, and we're undertaking it as owner builders. We still live in the house with our two children as the work goes on around us, so you can imagine it’s a tad stressful (I’m sure my blood pressure would be high if they tested me right now!).

I was thinking about the connection between writing and building. I’m a pantser, so my planning is a bit sketchy when I start a manuscript, but many writers I know (such as my CP) like to create detailed plans prior to beginning a new manuscript. It’s rather like designing the architectural plans and doing research before construction – you need to know where you’re going before you start, and where you’d like to be at the end.

When it comes to constructing the story, writers must be aware of publisher guidelines so they can target the right lines or publisher. Similarly, when it comes to building, there are council rules builders need to be familiar with before work begins. There’s no point designing elaborate plans without a solid knowledge of what is actually allowed in the council area you reside. And budget limits – like word count limits – dictate how the project can progress.

Manuscripts also have a way of taking unexpected detours when ideas begin to flow, and story development begins. That’s when editing or revisions comes in to play – it can all be tidied up at a later date. Even the most organised of writers can’t prevent modifications to their plot as the story develops, so some flexibility is required. Once building/renovation begins, it can get rather messy as well. In order to create something brilliant, the work site can become overloaded, or problems arise, despite attempts to keep things orderly. Builders/homeowners need to accept changes may occur to the original designs, and there isn’t much they can do about it.

Once the writer begins to breathe life into the characters, things begin to click into place. The story unfolds in such a way that the picture begins clearer, and the bones of the story are fleshed out to the point it becomes interesting. Likewise, when the frame of a house goes up, and then the bricks (or similar façade) are added, you begin to see the potential of the home – the builder/architect/homeowner’s vision is being realised.

As writers, we are constantly told our ‘voice’ is what makes up unique. The way in which we express ourselves and tell our story is what makes us stand out from the rest – we can be inspired by others, but need to strive for our own style. Similarly, when it comes to building or decorating, homeowners can make their homes different and unique during the design, construction and fit out phases of the project. The result is their home is a statement of who they are and reflects their personality and tastes. Whether others like it or not is another matter entirely!

As you can see, there are many connections between writing and building/renovating. I’m sure there are more I haven’t considered, but I need to go off and confirm an order of cornices in preparation for the plasterers this week. Writing has to take a back seat at the moment, but I’m hoping next week will mean more time for editing my current WIP.

Ciao, for now!

:-) Mon

Friday, July 3, 2009

Hunky and a humanitarian!


I've been very slack of late when it comes to reporting on the hunkalicious Hugh Jackman. I know I have a reputation to uphold when it comes to delivering news about Australia's hottest export, and I haven't been delivering. Naughty, naughty me!

Well, news just came in yesterday that Hugh is now joining the fight against poverty by becoming a representative for Australia at the UN. Hugh has pledged support for the Global Poverty Project, and people are being asked to make a pledge in the fight to end world poverty.

I'm fulfilling one of my pledges by letting you all know about this. So go ahead! Make a pledge :-)

Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Enthusiasm!

I found this article on enthusiasm, and thought I'd share it with you all.

Nine Characteristics of Enthusiastic People

Author: Ineke Van Lint


Enthusiasm is passion. Enthusiasm is living your dream. Enthusiasm is a divine energy you will feel as a reward for pursuing your dreams and staying on your own path.

Someone who is earnestly looking for his mission, discovers it and lives it, will organize his entire life around this divine assignment. This person offers his talents to the world, betters his environment, adds his personal value to it, and ends up happy and satisfied.

The characteristics below help you recognize this person (or become one yourself!) :

1. Enthusiasm is the most obvious feature. This person lives live fully, enjoys every moment, and lives in the present, radiating a lot of self-confidence. He knows he is valid part of the universe and feels appreciated and guided.

2. This person possesses a special driving force that guides her through the roadblocks. He has access to an endless source of energy that lifts him above the masses. His energy level is much higher than average. People can notice he is being lifted up by a kind of light beam. He is very engaged, travels lightly and makes a delicate impression. He is convinced that any roadblocks can be overcome. Nothing stops him.

3. This person easily makes choices. There is something guiding the course of his life, namely his mission, which he uses as a road map to find out where to go next and with whom. He can tell good company from bad company, unimportant matters from important matters. He doesn’t lose himself in irrelevant details but remains focused on his mission. He is guided by his inner voice, his intuition.

4. He dares to take risks. He has the courage to finish the projects he started. He has the energy and wisdom to concretely manifest his ideas.

5. He possesses an extraordinary creativity, inspiring those people around him. He has the ability to create and produce. He is capable of manifesting his thoughts: what is an idea today will become real within a few months or even earlier. He makes full use of his resources. He fully realizes his psychological and spiritual potential.

6. This person has a mysterious charisma. People like to be near him, enjoy his high energy level and feel invigorated afterwards. People pick up some wisdom from him and feel better after meeting him.

7. He has an unwavering faith in the universe and in himself, as he too is part of this universe. He is aware of spiritual law and lives according to them, consciously or unconsciously. He understands how his dreams and passions are the engine of his evolution and he knows the universe is organized such that it meets his needs. First and foremost he listens to his heart and follows its directions with faith and conviction.

8. This person exhibits a high level of dedication, gets fully engaged, and knows the universe to be his biggest and best partner. He has a clear vision of his goal, does not get distracted, and uses his energy entirely towards the manifestation of his dreams. When he experiences fear, it does not paralyze him, but doubles his devotion. He knows fear is something you have to go through, he focuses on what is more important than his fear, and for this he can count on his inner strength and guidance.

9. He is original in his approach and experiences total freedom while fulfilling his mission. He is aware of the fact that he is the co-creator of his life. He is not being lived, not warming the bench, not being afraid of what’s going to hit him next. On the contrary, he reflects about his future and takes all necessary action to effectively realize his desired future.

Someone who has found his mission and takes it to heart is someone who has deciphered the secret code of the soul. And he receives the corresponding gifts: a great deal of enthusiasm, an extraordinary creativity and deep satisfaction. He accepts these gifts gracefully and gratefully, and generously offers them to other people who cross his path. He is a shining light in the life of those who are so happy to have met him.

Join the enthusiastics yourself! Become a person happy to get out of bed in the mroning, ready to go on with your mission. It’s all about finding your passion and living it out! Get out of this life of misery, do what you like, do what feels good, have faith and start finally living your real life!

Article Source: http://www.articlesbase.com/motivational-articles/nine-characteristics-of-enthusiastic-people-106285.html

About the Author:
Written by Ineke Van Lint, psychologist. Find your passion and boost your life with enthusiasm. Live your life your way, full of joy and abundance . A brand new free ebook on htpp:// www.theenthusiasm.com

Monday, June 29, 2009

Perfection Personified

Song on my iPod: Pretty Brown Eyes by Mint Condition


My current hero is quite a handsome devil (as most romantic heroes are). He's physically beautiful with a face made for GQ magazine, and body made for all sorts of naughty stuff *swoon*.

Although the package is perfect, he has internal flaws (of course). But I'm having a bit of dilemma. I'm wondering if I need to make him MORE flawed, and add a bit of a physical imperfection, otherwise he may be too perfect for readers.

I'm not talking a lump on his back like Quasimodo, but maybe a scar on his chest from throwing knives around in the boardroom? Or from a romp in the hay that went horribly wrong when he landed on a pitchfork? Maybe a stiletto was embedded in his chest after he ditched a lover, and now there's a dent in his rippling pectorals?

The question I ask is this: do you mind a physically perfect hero, with loads of internal scars/imperfections? Or do prefer a physically imperfect hero with battle scars, a whopping great tattoo or a third nipple?! Lol.

Friday, June 26, 2009

RIP Farrah and Michael

Song on my iPod: PYT by Michael Jackson

I'm still busy editing, but had to blog about the passing of Farrah Fawcett and Michael Jackson.


It was incredibly sad to hear the reports of Farrah's illness, and her slow demise. Farrah was best known for her role in Charlie's Angels (and for her fabulous locks!), but she was also a mother and the much loved partner of Ryan O'Neal. Apparently, Farrah and Ryan were to wed before she died, but it never came to be. How heartbreaking.


And what can I say about Michael Jackson? I must admit I was in quite a bit of shock this morning when I heard the news. I've been a big fan of Michael's since I was a child, and the first album I ever bought was Thriller. I also had a bit of a crush on him during the Thriller days before all that plastic surgery, and I regret never seeing him perform live.


My children are also fans of his songs, and my son enjoys watching Michael's dance moves and video clips on the web. I'm a little concerned about how he'll react to the news of his death, and hope he handles it well. It was a hot topic of discussion at the playground today, so who knows what will be said amongst the kids?


Michael's life was disturbing and tragic in parts, but his talent will be recognised and celebrated for many years to come. I'm also extremely sorry for his children, and hope their lives are less troubled than their father's.

RIP, Farrah and Michael.

Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Editing Update

I'm in the process of editing my manuscript. It appears to involve painful amounts of chopping and rewriting (you know what I mean!).

I decided to do a bit of research into the most effective ways to self edit, and came up with the following links. Hope they're of use to you as well:
I apologise for being a bit lazy with my blogging of late, but I'm quite preoccupied with editing. Really struggling to wrestle my manuscript into some sort of decent shape, but I'm determined to tame it and make it shine :-)

Saturday, June 20, 2009

Blogs/Website of interest...

I'm having a very busy weekend this weekend, but popped in to post some links to two great blog posts and a website I've just looked at.

The first is from an agent, and talks about conferences http://www.thebentagency.com/index.php?option=com_wrapper&view=wrapper&Itemid=60. Very timely info for those of us attending the RWAust conference, and for anyone pitching to an agent.

Jenny Hutton has again listed the hero character traits required for Harlequin lines. Check it out at http://www.iheartpresents.com/2009/06/mills-boon-editors-hero-checklist/.

Lastly, there's been some discussion on our loop with regards to the differences between the Harlequin lines. Someone posted this link to Ally Blake's website http://www.allyblake.com/writingtips-sexyvssweet.html which makes the differences between sweet/sexy/sexy sensation very clear. I wish I'd seen this before my e-pitch, but never mind!

Well, off I go to do some housework. Not very exciting, but much needed in the Wood house :-)

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Enter The Parrot - Lock up your daughters, TF and Cedric are here!

Song on my iPod: Sweet Dreams by Beyonce

I've just finished reading Kiki Lon's Enter the Parrot which will be released by the Wild Rose Press this Week. It's YA fiction, which isn't what I normally read (or write, for that matter), and I must say I was blown away by how brilliant it was!

It's a tale about Jade, a girl from a Chinese family. But there's a twist: she's white. Or as she puts it "I'm the white girl in the Wong family." The premise is funny, and it leads to a bit of chaos when Jade has to do some detective work on behalf of her grandfather. She deals with missing parrots, kung fu, mysterious messages, secret societies, cultural confusion and nasty high school students a long the way.

I loved the character, and thoroughly enjoyed reading about her escapades. Jade is tough yet sweet, and just trying to get through school unscathed. But her life isn't simple, especially when she has two hero hotties to choose from - TF, the bad boy, and Cedric, the golden boy. I can understand why she fancies both of them, and I imagine many young readers will fall in love with them as well.

The girls at the We Love Ya blog are discussing the book this week, so check it out at http://weloveya.wordpress.com/. And if you know of any teenage girls, make sure you get them a copy, because they'll love it!

I wish Kiki the best of luck with the book, and look forward to a sequel. Not that there's one planned, as far as I know. But the book has unresolved matters, so I'd really like to see how crazy Jade's life will become. Hint, hint, Kiki! :-)

Monday, June 15, 2009

Dress Up Addiction

I think I've developed a dress up addiction! Couldn't resist having a dress up party for my daughter's 3rd birthday (look out cocktail party at the conference!).

We had a lovely time with her friends and their parents, and she was spoilt with lots of pressies. Here she is giving me a big cuddle - she was dressed as Tinkerbell, and I was a good witch (of course!).


Now, it's back to cleaning the house. Then the writing can start!

Friday, June 12, 2009

Happy Birthday, Princess!

Song on my iPod: Two Hearts by Phil Collins


Tomorrow is my little angel's 3rd birthday. I can't believe how quickly time has flown!

Happy Birthday, Princess. Mummy loves you!

Wednesday, June 10, 2009

'D' Day... as in 'Do it, Damn it!'

Song on my iPod: Whenever You Feel Like it by Kylie Minogue

Today is the day I'm going to send in my e-pitch. It isn't due until tomorrow, but I'm starting to get sick of the sight of the thing!

I've been fiddling and mucking around with it so much that it barely resembles the original version. And there's a limit to what I can do right now with two sick kids at home, so making major changes isn't an option.

Yep, today is 'D' day. I'll do it today... at some stage. Maybe this afternoon after I've read it again about 100 times? Will I have the guts to press the 'send' button?!

Thursday, June 4, 2009

Pitch Perfect... or Close.

Song on my iPod: Love, Sex, Magic by Justin Timberlake and Ciara

A few days ago my CP and I received news we were amongst the 40 people to get an e-pitch with Harlequin.

For those of you who don't know, Harlequin aren't able to send an editor to Brisbane for the RWAust conference, so they're offering the e-pitch alternative to members who expressed an interest in pitching. This is a really big deal, and a great opportunity for us.

I'm trying to polish my pitch until it's perfect - but what is perfect? I know my pitch will be good, but whether it will be spectacular or even compare to the other pitches, I have no idea. It's rather like submitting to a competition and not having a clue what the standard will be. I'm sure the standard will be extremely high, because the talent of our members is amazing. I should be very, very nervous!

I won't lie, I AM nervous. Just writing this blog post makes me feel a bit sick. The butterflies are swirling around, and the thought of being ready by next week... well... it makes me want to pass out and/or vomit. Doing a direct pitch probably would have ended in disaster (can you imagine ?!) so doing it this way is a much better alternative.

I probably won't be blogging much for the next week as I have to polish, polish, polish! And to all the members who get the chance to pitch, I wish you the best of luck. Let's show Harlequin how much we Aussie authors have to offer!

Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Things that make you go 'Hmmm'

Song on my iPod: Love Today by Mika

I was driving to an appointment yesterday, listening to the radio and minding my own business (should have been listening to my iPod) when I was verbally assaulted. No, not by some mad driver on the road, but by a radio advert.

It was advertising laser hair removal, and the gal promoting the clinic/product announced the service was the 'unhurtingest' laser hair removal out there. What the?! She may as well have reached through the radio and punched me in the ears. I'm sure I cringed and swerved as I heard the bold announcement using a non-existent word. Aaaargh!

What is it with advertisers, the media and companies using bad, bad, bad language? Or rather non-existent language which teaches kids it's okay to make up words, or better yet, these fictional words actually exist? There are people who don't comprehend these words are, in fact, made up by marketers to make people remember their stupid campaigns.

It's like those 'Un' ads with the NRMA. Grrr. They don't UNannoy me, or UNworry me. They make me very UNhappy. It's very poor English on the part of the marketers and, in my opinion, bad judgement by the NRMA.

Then there are companies that name themselves without any concept of grammar. Every time I drive past Fishing-R-Us (displayed in giant letters on the side of a building) I want to park my car, get out, and give them an earful. Yes, yes, it might be dramatic, but how dumb can these people be? Apart from trying to rip off the Toy-R-Us concept, they get it so VERY wrong.

I probably need to get off my high horse, but stuff like this drives me nuts. We all make mistakes, but these are unacceptable. I think crimes against language should result in punishment - in the form of a spanking using a dictionary and/or a thesaurus. The bigger and heavier the better! Lol.

Thursday, May 28, 2009

Dulcis in fundo

I've lost my voice, so all is peaceful in the Wood house. Doesn't mean I can't type - thank goodness!

So, Dulcis in fundo, you ask? It's connected to a conversation my father and I were having some months back. He's a very well-read person, interested in many subjects and topics, and I enjoy having chats with him (one day I plan on writing his biography because he has some wonderful stories to tell about his childhood and migrating to Australia, but that's another topic).

Anyway, on this particular occasion, my father used the term Dulcis in fundum or Dulcis in fundo. He's been known to pepper some conversations with the occasional Latin (thanks to his Italian education), and during this chat about a subject I can't quite recall, he used the phrase to indicate after trials and tribulations, there's often a sweet/happy end.

This struck me as a very appropriate phrase for romance writers. As authors, the idea is for us to set up our characters to have all sorts of issues/dramas/tension/conflict until they reach a 'black moment'. They think all is lost. They're at a very low point. But then there's a twist/happy turn of events. There is a sweet (dulcis) end, where you save the very best situation/scenario until last i.e. the couple have overcome their obstacles to achieve their 'happily ever after'.

I have a feeling I'll be sprouting Dulcis in fundo in future. Ask me any question, and that'll be the answer! Lol. It may have to become my motto on my blog, or a website in future. Anyone else have a motto or saying they favour, or one which is appropriate for romance writing?

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Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Sick of being sick...

I've had a shocker health-wise in 2009. My body has been playing all sorts of tricks on me, and it aint funny. As I type this blog post I have a blurry eye so don't be surprised if I start repeating myself because I can't see properly. Don't be surprised if I start repeating myself because I can't see properly. Huh?

I've really struggled to get my foggy, tired, stressed, aching brain to focus on editing my manuscript, but I can't think straight. I LOVE editing, so to be unable to do it frustrates me. My back hates me right now, but I'm seeing a wonderful chiropracter who is bending me into all sorts of weird positions and cracking the bejeebers out of me. I feel great temporarily, and then the aches start again. Argh.

Anyway, back to the writing stuff, got some news regarding changes to the pitch sessions at our Brisbane conference. It looks like I won't be doing a direct pitch after all, but the good thing is I'll be able to relaaaax in Brisbane. That's not to say I'll be rocking up in shorts, plastic sandals and a Mexican hat, rather I don't have the added pressure of pitching.

I promise I'll start blogging with some sense and order soon. Well, I shouldn't promised, but I'll TRY and get myself sorted out.

Wednesday, May 20, 2009

I won ANOTHER prize!


Yep, I was at it again recently, commenting on a blog post when I should have been writing. Can't help myself.

Well, it was certainly worth it as I won a prize during the Romance Bandits Second Anniversary Blowout! Woo hoo! I won based on the titles I made up using some images posted on the blog. My titles were:

1. Farmed Virgin, Ploughing Bachelor

2. Shoeless, Soggy and Shameless

3. The Deepest Darkness Desires of Desiree Desdemona

4. Resuscitate My Bosom, Beloved

I received an email today to say I won a book by Donna MacMeans, who I believe writes historical romance. I'm looking forward to reading my prize, and adding a new author to my 'must read' list.

Now, back to work...

Monday, May 18, 2009

Steam and Wolverine...

Playing on my iPod: Whatta Man by Salt N Pepa & En Vogue

No, I wasn't generating steam whilst I watched the new X-Men Origins Wolverine (although I was damn close to doing so because of all the shirtless and nude scenes featuring HJ. Phwooooar).

Actually, Hubby and I spent hours steam cleaning our dirty carpets and upholstery (it's not a euphemism for something else, you filthy, filthy people) and we decided to reward ourselves with dinner and movie. Fortunately hubby was agreeable to seeing Wolverine as I was pretty keen to see it. Purely for the story/plot/characterisation etc., of course...


Well, I REALLY enjoyed the film, and love mutant Logan/Wolverine even more so after seeing it. It starts with Logan as a boy and progresses to show the development of the character as he struggles with the power he possesses and the animal within him, which are both a gift and a curse.

I felt so much sympathy for him. Despite his deeds, he is incredibly likeable and - dare I say - lovable. This is largely due to Hugh's sympathetic portrayal of the character. I won't lie to you, it's a massive part of the appeal, but the character is so powerful and complicated and angst ridden, you can't resist him. He's gorgeous, a badass, but also noble to the core.

If you're a fan of action flicks, you'll enjoy this movie. If you're a fan of sweet romantic comedies, you'll be a little disappointed (although the love between Logan/Wolverine and Kayla/Silverfox is touching). For those of you who have the hots for Hugh and want to see him in all of his glory, it's worth the price of the ticket. 'The Best Body on the Planet and the Universe' award definitely goes to Hugh Jackman. My goodness, he's ripped!

Oh, and watch out for 'barn' scene. Hugh can park his bike in my barn any time he likes (!). He he he he.

Friday, May 15, 2009

Does the car maketh the man?

Playing on my iPod: Recipe for Love by Harry Connick Jnr

I've been pondering the question 'Does a car maketh the man?' about my current WIP. I know it may seem trivial, but I think the type of car the hero drives says a lot about the character.

My hero is an alpha male - wealthy, attractive, sophisticated, ambitious, did I say wealthy? etc. etc. He needs a hot car that says "I'm expensive to keep, but my owner has oodles of dosh so that's not an issue at all and too bad if you can't afford me, commoner." Just kidding. Well, in a way it's true, but reality bites and I'm trying to be gentle here ;-)


The car has an appearance in a scene, so you could say it's a minor character (it's relevant to the plot so it needs to be there). Originally I had the hero drive a BMW Z4 Roadster in black (have you seen the latest BMW ad with the car painting a giant pic using it's tyres? It's a bit like that), but I'm wondering whether it's flash enough. His car has to be stylish yet fun, but at the same time does it suggest my hero has... well, how should I put it... endowment issues?!

Should my hero have a Hummer or a Ferrari? Or a Lamborghini Diablo because the man is devilishly handsome (get it? Diablo? Devil. Yeah, okay). Or should he have a Volvo to show he's responsible and sensible on the road, even if he's ruthless in the boardroom/business/bedroom? Hmmm.

Thinking. Thinking. Thinking. What do you think? Does the car maketh the man, or do you think it doesn't matter at all? Or better yet, should he be so rich he wants a driver to take him around the place, even if it's a short trip?

Thursday, May 14, 2009

Back on track...


I've been absent from my blog for a little while. Life has been hectic (when isn't it?) and I haven't been able to focus much on writing. So today, I'm back on track, focused and keen and full of world-changing ideas (well, that's a bit of an exaggeration, but I can feign brilliance and enthusiasm!).

Today my plan is to catch up on blogging, do a bit of critiquing for my CP, and edit some of my work. I also have to create a list of questions for our Bootcamp session with author Amy Andrews. I'll let you know all about that after tonight's session.

I was also doing a bit of research into craft and found a bit more info about the Modern/Presents line I'm aiming for. This info below was posted by Jenny Hutton, Harlequin Editor on the Harlequin Community wesbite, and I thought I'd share as it's extremely useful to everyone writing for the line. Then again, it probably applies to many lines, so take the time to have a look at this.

WRITING FOR MODERN: the mistakes that are most frequently made

This tutorial was originally entitled Frequently Asked Questions. But when the Editors at Modern thought about those, they realised there was one question that is asked far more often than any other: what are the most common mistakes made by unpublished writers? So here goes with our Top Five:

· Using too much narrative and not enough dialogue.

This is really a symptom of something else – the writer ‘telling’ the story, instead of letting her characters speak for themselves. In certain types of fiction, a narrative approach is fair enough: readers are happy to enjoy a more leisurely journey and stop off for interludes of reflection and description. But category romance – and Modern Romance – is essentially a short, sharp emotional fix, so our audience want to get to know the characters as fast and experience their unfolding emotions as immediately as possible; use of dialogue is the best way to achieve this. A rule of thumb is sixty per cent narrative, forty per cent dialogue. Or, if you have gone for more than a page without a line of speech, it’s quite likely that your reader will have gone, too, to make herself a cup of reviving coffee…and maybe she won’t come back…

· Too many minor characters.

The hero and heroine’s relationship is paramount to every Modern Romance novel, so it must remain the primary focus all of the time. If you struggle to generate intensity in the central romance, it could be because you got carried away writing about the heroine’s best friend and her adorable little puppy. Limit your use of secondary characters to as few as you can and make sure that if and when they appear, they do nothing more than providing a step forward in the development of the romance. Children are especially dangerous territory in this respect: it’s so easy to enjoy creating a cute kid who ends up getting in the way of the hero and heroine getting it on …
Remember the wise old British saying: Children should be seen and not heard. Off to the nursery with them!

· Too much background detail.

A mistake very similar in nature to an abundance of minor characters, but one frequently made by new writers who have lots of research that they’re dying to include – memories of a fabulous trip to Venice, or all the information they’ve gleaned from an excellent website about Greece. But, though the armchair travelogue style used to be very popular in our books (along with plaid picnic rugs and thermos flasks), these days, long-haul travel and exotic destinations are within reach of almost anybody, so a mini-guidebook to the flora and fauna of a remote Pacific island, or a re-run of that Venetian tour you took no longer holds any mystery. We’ve been there too and we just need a little flavour and colour to bring it all back and make the romance sparkle!

Global Warming may force us to travel less and spur the return of the armchair experience and the picnic rug, but for now – concentrate on the romance!

· Lack of emotional depth.

We editors often come upon manuscript submissions where the writing is competent, the conversation between characters is pleasant, the tone remains even throughout and there is little or no build-up of emotional or physical tension between the main characters…and then suddenly, without any warning, there is an explicit sex scene! Believe me, it’s enough to make us choke on our lunchtime sandwiches!

Check out our earlier post on Generating Emotional Conflict. The most satisfying romances are the ones where the level of conflict is high, passions run deep and the sensuality is at boiling point! In other words, place your hero and heroine’s emotions at the forefront of your story and work at creating an ebb and flow between them that will tantalize and excite the reader while propelling her towards explosive semi and final climaxes. All relationships have emotional highs and lows and, as this is romantic fantasy, the reading experience needs to be heightened and feelings intense.

· Overuse of cliché.

This can present itself in a number of guises, for instance, the hero and heroine’s first meeting, characterization, language and even what the hero and heroine are wearing.
It’s very tempting as a new writer to reach for the familiar; you have published writers whose styles you find inspiring and, of course, with fifty thousand words at your disposal, you want to get the message across as quickly and easily as you can.

But don’t lose sight of your own voice – your own particular use of vocabulary and those quirky little observations and phrases that make you unique and entertaining as a writer.
Do you really want to open your novel with a car collision between the hero and heroine’s vehicles when you – and your reader – will have seen that done a thousand times before? Will your hero always be arrogant and flare his nostrils, or does he have a more complex reaction? Does your description of how he eventually makes love to the heroine contain lots of euphemisms about body parts – or can you convey to us how the heroine actually feels?


I find I often read about how to do things, but not what I shouldn't do, so this info will really help me with my rewrites this week. I need to go back to the drawing board on some things, especially my dialogue and narrative ratio.

Btw, happy belated Mother's Day to all the mums out there - I had a lovely time with my family, and got very spoilt by my hubby and kids! Hope everyone had a wonderful weekend with their families.

:-) Mon

Thursday, May 7, 2009

Reflecting on the past...

I was over at the We Love YA blog the other day reading a great post about prom fashion and the eighties, and it made me think of my Year 12 Formal.

I graduated in the nineties, but big hair was still in fashion and my shoes were... well... chunky to say the least! The combo of hair and shoes made me look taller than my date who just happens to be my hubby now! (He's taller than me, btw, but you can't tell with all that hairspray on my head).


I remember I bought him a Ren and Stimpy tie to wear on the night. For those of you who don't know Ren and Stimpy, they were from a cartoon show and their catchphrase was "Happy, happy, joy, joy". My hubby really liked the show back then, but it appears to have disappeared into oblivion...


I also remember DH telling me, well before the formal, that he was going to wear a suit like Randy Watson from Sexual Chocolate, and I believed him (he delivers his humour straight faced, and it took me a while to realise he was kidding). Has anyone seen Coming to America? Well, here's Randy Watson, so you can imagine my horror when he told me he was wearing a blue suit with a ruffled shirt. Yikes.


Fortunately the formal was a success, and 15 years later we're still together. Awww. I love my leading man, and he looks so good in a suit! :-)

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